It took me forever to read, but tis perfecto, you really capped this one off jenna, love the mixtures of styles, you must come up with an easy name for it, i give it a flawless 5/5!!! keep up these great poems babe!!!

Wow. that was really good, i didn't really like the beginning of the poem that much, but the ending..........it just astounded me. especially the last phrase. it was just beautiful. 5/5
gabriella