Beautiful...check mine leave a comment i wil appreciate it

Awww what a cute poem!! good job!!

Hmm sweet lines... nice

Damn short n damn sweet

a woo-hoo @ this one :D

~Wake~

I love my poem!!! its short but its sweet!!!lol

Ok first of all it is in all caps, which is a turn-off to me and most likely many others. Also, instead of using slang such as "kno" type the full word out, "know" you'll look more intellegent than using slang. The length of this poem is very short, and I felt it could be lengthened a lot more to comprise the reader to take a hold of it better, but that's just my opinion.

Other than that, it was a nice rhyme even though the first two lines reminded me of Barney.

Peace, Joe

Nice job....short and sweet.....i like it,,,
~*~Cindy~*~

That was great

Love this poem

Love this poem

Well i love it.