"being with you,
never felt so splendid,
but my alarm went off,
the best dream ended"

^^I totally understand what you mean by that, its happened to me plenty of times...another great poem!

Brooke<3

AWESOME!!
LOVE IT!!

Omg i loove this poem Great job One of the greatest ive seen on the site awsome job man

Beautiful as ever.... Loved it Paul!

Take care,

Ingrid

:( aw very good poem paullllll
im sry whoever its about dissapeared..even tho i have a feeling its nicole :-p
this is def a 5/5

jenie

This is heaps cute.
It's pretty original,
I like it :] xx