Comments : The Kiss of Dawn

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Another one powerful and filled with hidden meanings. I like the choice of words in it, and the descriptions are flawless. Whole piece is excellently written, from the beginning to the end.
    Ending stanza is especially effective and captivating, and my favorite part of the poem is:

    -Like a razorblade kiss,
    given by butterflies of antique glass,
    drinking eternally; the blood from my past.-

    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Jade

    I like the poem a lot. Great choice of words. And wonderful meanings.
    Your really quite talented.
    Keep it up Budday

  • 16 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit


    Your level of sensitivity is truly palpable in this piece.......

    "and the shadows weep", indeed........

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe