Beautiful writing and Excellent Form.. And Good Flow.. My goodness its just Great!

5.5**
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Beautiful write!!!
Keep up the good work.5/5

God bless u

=) loved it!!!
love the way you draw out a simple statement "nothing stays the same" to be so interesting and detailed.... its amazing to read it really pulled me in!!

well done!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Of all the things in life
which are to many to name.
One thing to count on
is nothing stays the same.

^how very true. this poem has a great message behind it. i love your description..and even though it's simple and short it gets that point across.
great work! =] keep it up.
--Viola

p.s. thanks for the comment on my poem! :)

Beautiful poem..i love the expressions

I agree.
have you ever tried free verse?

I love this

Wow i loved it your a awsome writer!!

XoXo~Jessica~oXoX

I loved it!!
5/5