Comments : A Graceful Swan

  • 14 years ago

    by Nisha

    Thats so pretty!!!!
    I luv it!

  • 14 years ago

    by sinead lisa

    =] Wicked Keep Up Thee Ghudd Workk !!
    <33

  • 14 years ago

    by emo angel

    Great pome! I can feel the emotion!

  • 14 years ago

    by Kaz

    Gr8 wrk... nice begining n end.. n the linei like in this poem is
    "It's too much,
    This I can't handle.
    I have to end it-
    It's time to put out this candle"
    good choice of lines

  • 14 years ago

    by Isabella

    Great heart felt poem from you.

  • 14 years ago

    by aleah

    That was good i should i another poem soon

  • 14 years ago

    by lost with out you

    Hey
    thanks
    yours is nice too
    :)