I won't vote here JayJ.
This is seriously not to my palate. The sentiment portrayed in the words is second to none. Everyone wishes to put across their feelings for those close to them.
But ..
Argh! No structure, lacking grammar, spelling errors. I know this is more than likely just me being in a different generation, and i almost definitely sound like my father. I just had to say - the sentiment is beautiful, the poem .. not so.
18 years ago
by Prophecies In Kodak
This to me.. Isnt even a poem.
More a paragraph of rambling that belongs more as a quote, or part of your profile.