Comments : Tortuous Obsession

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Flawless, as always.
    I'm glad to see that you're writing again. :)

    "What makes me stay, I will never know,
    dealing with abyssmal emotions that i'll never show."

    ^ No particular reason, but I love that couplet.

    Overall, friggin fabulous. :]] 5.5
    - Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    I like this poem. i like most of your poems. keep up the good work