Comments : Dirtied Up Memories

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Congrats on hitting 300 poems. This was was very good and I liked it a whole lot. I could relate to it at the moment, so I liked it even more. I know what it's like to want to move on and getting rid of stuff that reminds you of him is a start. You use rhymes that I wouldn't think to use and you do it great! This poem could have been cliched, but they way you wrote it, it didn't seem to slip towards that.
    Great Job & Take Care<3
    Ciao~

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    I like this a lot. I can relate and your emotion is expressed beautifully. It takes strength to move on and I can see how your trying to be strong and say I can get over him, yet your like but I don't want to. Lol. Great job! The poem was beautiful just as your others.
    5/5

    Amber...

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Wow, every single line of this was pure genius. You wrote it on such a personal level, but worded it so perfectly that the reader can relate it to their own lives and make it personal to them as well. As a teenage girl, I am able to say that I know and feel exactly what is being said here...been there a time or two...and you wrote out exactly that moment in my life. You amaze me, your talent is beyond words.

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This was a lot better than the last one I think because it had flavor...definately not bland what-so-ever. It was great! And very descriptive. I could picture what was happening and that definately helps the reality of the poem. Fantastic job! :)
    ~Midnight Sun