Comments : The Friend I Had

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I certainly didn't see that ending coming...so beautifully written and yet heartwrenching and moving at the same time.
    The only thing I didn't like was that you seemed to use a lot of fillers (I, and, you etc)
    if you try eliminating them sometimes it makes the flow much smoother, but other than this, this was a beautiful write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Isabella

    That was sooooooo sad.
    I don't know how I would react, if I ever got to lose one of my friends, without telling them how much they mean to me first.

    Love the repetition, and your chose of words.