Wow
amazing writing
it's truly really good
this girl must be very lucky
keep it up!

Beautiful. This sounds.. on the spot. Or right after that happened. <3

Great poem , wonderfully written and very heartfelt piece , ain't it funny the turns life puts you through, great job keep it up ,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Hi Kaz, this is Shama,
Gr8 poem, I actually felt I was there lookin at her too, she is lucky U hav wrote such a piece on her, Truly.

Woah !

superb this, aint it?? lol

it just so happens i knw the gurl xD .. and u did an awesome job..the picture painted leaves an impression , mes amis.. incredibly amazing piece this..oh n we'll find someone even better for you >=] *wink wink* xD

Keep it up

~Wake~

Wow, yea this a great poem. i kinda felt like i was looking at her too. very beautifully written. tea check out some of mine and ill do the same for you.

I really like this one! im giving you a 5/5 again lol and adding you to my faves!

Wow!! So far I LOVE all of your poems!!=) I wish I could write like that.