• 16 years ago

    by I love you always and today

    I like this poem because i can really relate great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem sad but well written and comes from the heart , thats what makes a poem a poem, you express your thoughts and feeling so greatly wonderful job ,and cheer up life will get better , Trust me I know better than anyone in the world, you have great talent , make it work for you and always hold your head up and be pride of who you are , everyone else will start to see the real you and respect you for that ,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alyssa Marie

    I added this to my favourites :] I admire how you just summarized every feeling I had about life. Thank you for that. I felt like I was right there, walking wiht the person. So close. So real. So intense o.O I felt it. 5/5 seriously.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shay

    It's a really good poem, you should be proud! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Xxcrazy4UxX

    I love your poem, its sad but what ever comes from the heart is the best.. im addin' this one to my favorites.. becuase i ablsolutly loved it.. :]

    <3 abby

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    This is good...
    i love it <3
    E X C E L L E N T
    i am going to read more

  • 16 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautiful poem again !!

    i guess u bring out the reality of life

    that we're born alone... we'll die alone !!

    i guess nothing else matters...

    gr8 work
    keep it up

    thanks for commenting on my poems


  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    You created great atmosphere through the poem, filled with emotions, especially sadness, and expressed your feelings excellently. The flow is little off in some places but that don't ruin whole impression too much. All in all, great job on this piece.
    Keep up, 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Awl! this is so sad! 5/5 lol