Comments : Back to basiics ( sucide the end )

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Very relatable..n really gr8 wrk.. the ending lines
    "So i bring that blade
    Across my wrist
    Say goodbye
    As i fall to the ground screaming i cant handle this"
    were the best... they were really touching..

  • 16 years ago

    by faye cooper

    The poem is well good but kinda scary how sum1 could do this but then when you think about it its well realistic! lol keep up the gd work. lol bi frm fayex

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow ive read alot of self harm poems but this one is a little unique 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.