Beautiful expression of thoughts here,nice job!5/5....Melody..=)

Great job Tracy D 5/5 I liked it alot

I like the ending very much, you put your self in to this piece and also it is simply beautiful. Very emotional poem, you created some special and great tone. I love it, it absolutely deserves 5/5

"as long as I have a hand to hold a pen
my eyes can't see the end. "

I love it, i think its such a simple way of explaining something that really isnt simple. Sometimes i can sit for hours with a pen, my mind racing, desperate to get things down onto paper and yet, it just doesnt seem to work. Excellent poem.

Kelly
xx

Great work.. I think we all have those moments..=)

5.5**
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And you will keep on writing nice poems for us!

And you will keep on writing nice poems for us!