Oh..so heartfelt...! I really loved the emotion you put in here, so sad but true.
Wonderful final lines, girl, keep it up!
Best wishes,5/5

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Amazing =)
Loved the last couple of lines:P
Great job.

Thanks for the comment
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amazing
i love the whole poem
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well written
5/5

That was really well written, clear and to the point but still full of deep emotions
cool stuff
5/5 =)
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I hope he read it, hehe!
Nice poem by you.

take care,

Ingrid