Wow this is amazin really deep i like it :)

Aw, the emotion just poured from this poem...and it was written really well, another great poem!

Brooke<3

Paul,

You know how to put it into words so well. I can almost see you sitting there on your couch. My heart goes out to you. I don't understand why people have to treat eachother this way....
Take care, sweetie!

Ingrid

Wow paul this is really good! i can actully relate to this one at the moment.
i really liked it!
miss ya!

jenie

IT"S VERY VERY GOOD!!
plus it's oh so sad.

Another great one, im not surprised tho u r so talented and u seem to be in touch with how i feel :)

Really great poem i can relate to it like so much i just had everything u put in there happen to me...i hope things get better for you you deserve to be treated so much better anyway really great poem 5/5