Again.. a really great poem.. definately keep up the good work.. 5/5 on both of your poems :) I miss New Zealand lol.

Very good poem, makes me think...

Really nice poem i like ur choice of wording keep it up

Another dark gem, good work.i loved it, yet another 5/5. this 1 i could really relate to.=)

Cory

I like dis poem is rel good great job

This is really good!
Your choice in words is repetitive, but thats how its meant to be to show a sorta dark mood.
An overall good poem.
5/5 for sure.

I know how u feel,
like its the only way to feel free from it all.
i used to cut and for that one second all the pain went away and it was like getting a glance of heaven for a split second.
But then i relise doing just add more pain;more fights starts expeciially when friends found out.
i still feel alone and thats why i wrote the poem the darkness;i found another way out of it all and int he dark is the only place that ii feel free and safe.
xx

This is very sad. it's a very good poem. i can't honestly say i relate to it but it makes me think...
5/5 for it though. very good writing.

i hope that everything is getting better for you! and if not i hope that it starts very soon.

aish
xxx

Wow!! Very good. So vivid as well.
I Like it.

Really nice poem ... makes me live in it
well done... keep it up

I can't begin to explain to you how much this relates to me.

You are incredible. This was incredible.

I couldn't give you any other then another 5/5.

If I were able to I would give you a 6/5.

Fantastic.

This is honestly amazing.
I remember that time in my life.
This describes it in a way of beauty.

Oh. wow. *blinks*
this is so poetic and yet raw.
I reallllly love it. 5 stars XD