Really really powerful i especially liked this part"Twisted hurtful words, looks, disbelief of how I am living
This looks in their eyes of what am I doing
Undesirable feeling of hurting the ones I love
Twisted shot in the heart every single day"5/5 u rock and ur going on my favorites!!

I really liked this one because you were speaking emotions that everyone feels and i especially loved the way you started every line
Well done!
5/5
*gem*