A w00-h00 @ this one..
a very sad write this, but amazingly done
superbly expressed..and an awesome job of expression..
loved the last stanza.
simply, Loved it !
Keep it coming. :D

~Wake~

I luv it

I loved reading every line, a very good poem by you!
Keep them coming.

Best wishes,

5/5 Ingrid

Good one... nice to read...

Really good! I love lines 3 - 6. The rhythm gets a little bit confused now and then, like in stanza 5. The penultimate line of that stanza maybe needs a bit of a mess around with? It ruins the rhythm a little. Loved it though! xxx