Very nice poem and the flow is beautiful plus the descriptions. The overall picture provoked by the content and the intensity if the poem is great. Keep it up dear :)

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Now this poem was absolutely wonderful especially the structure. The whole looked amazing and the flow was amazing also. It's very well written and shows a lot of feeling. Great job!

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I'm meant for more
and this I know
beyond that door
there..

..I must go

^This is pretty effective ending but it should be like that( I think)

I'm meant for more
and this I know
beyond that door
there...

...I must go

Anyway good poem, unusual subject but don't understand is the note that you wrote above the poem part of it, or that is your explanation?

Anyway once again original, your choice of words is great and you made powerful atmosphere in whole piece, imagery is also vivid! Well done!