What can I say about it? :D
We really struggled about it but now it's done...Phew

You know what hassan?
We did a great job..and if you didn't offer me to do one,It was really out of my mind

Thanks for giving me time everytime
You're a true friend to have

Take care,
Laura

Really amazing write.
U both did a great job.
5/5

Keep up the good work

God bless u

I am soooo not a big fan of friendship poems but i found this to be rather staggering...
it brought back memories of friendships left behinds and those yet to come...and the line,

"..to lose all my individuality"....damn...

i'm not sure what you meant by that...but to me that is one of my favorite metaphors, of being so close to someone, that you lose yourselves in one another and become one...
which is one of the greatest feelings ever....

Yet again a nice poem ;) you work very well in collabs as well, hassan! keep that up ;) 5/5,for both of you ;)
x

Really excellent job done by you and your friend.... when i read your work I am totally involed with the beauty of your poetric work. 5/5 for both....:)

Take Care
RASHEED KHOKHAR

True words about friendship and you both have highlighted and position and dignity of true friends. Excellent collab with candy! 5/5

tc
Fsams

WonderfuL writinG, excellenT feelingS, beautifuL commentS abovE, manY greetingS foR youR sincerR feelingS...

moreoveR...... somE oF thE besT oneS haD giveN theiR commentS tO yoU... itS a pleasurE... anD interestinG.... sO, includE mE alonG witH thosE professionaL authorS indeeD..

luzaN

Well done. I think you both did an amazing job with this collab. Great job.

Cicely

This is so amazing, wonderfully written and full of emotions. doing a collab was'nt an easy thing. This poem is one of the best i've read so far. Keep it up. Regards to Laura.

Hassan
It is so nice to have a friend like this in your life.

At many ups and downs of life;
There stood a shadow by my side.
A friend but an angel for me,
Now its clear for everyone to see.

These lines are very good.
Take Care Cindy

This is a wonderful collaboration-congratulations to you both. The use of language is excellent, the rhyme scheme is unique and it flows nicely. But it is the meaning of the poem that really shines through.

Peace,

Grey Ajurahck