Comments : A Friend Depart

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful written yet flow within beautiful expressed emotions. "Any person needs at least four such friends; Every person owes it to himself to be such a friend to at least four fellow humans." Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    A truly poignant piece Ben, very touching, about a friend who you love like you love your family, possibly more. I really loved this line
    "Sitting in desolation and solitude a lonely tear escapes my eye."

    Great words.

    Greta xo

  • 16 years ago

    by AJ Irving

    This was great

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    What a wonderful piece you have penned.

    Distances have grown longer, time and years pass hurriedly by.
    Sitting in desolation and solitude a lonely tear escapes my eye.

    I have felt this so many times as you know....I have been blessed with friendship.
    ~BRAVO~ Son
    Love you

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Great poem, well written. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    That's so beautiful. That was truly awesome, I don't know if I have the sniffles because I'm a bit sick, or because of the poem. :P Anywho, that was incredibly enjoyable, and I just wish to say that you wrote an awesomely poetic piece.

    Thank you for that insight.

    ~Richhieeeeee

  • 16 years ago

    by Jade

    This is a 5/5 poem.
    It's really swell
    Keep it up
    Jadee.

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Ben, true words of wisdom you gave shared through this poem. True a good friend is biggest asset of life and there absence can make big differnce.Very well penned.

    Regards
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow.. such a beautiful poem .. there is true beauty in each and every line you have written here - very deep and emotional and really touching!

    This poem has a really mature feeling to it which makes it really interesting to read. A lot of people can relate to this I think because everyone at one point or another in their life loses a friend - maybe not to death or anything that serious, but maybe a friendship just faded - - it's happened to me many times.

    I think this poem is more for the Lord taking a friend away but I think it can go either way which makes the poem more beautiful. The way you wrote the poem gives it a sort of happy feeling - even though it is about something sad. I like how you focused on the positive things about your friendship and not the fact that it is over.

    In this new age of darkness a true friend is greater than gold.
    My loyal companion when the Lord made you he broke the mold.

    ^^ I couldn't agree more with those lines. A true friend in this world is more valuable than any amount of money. Without friends and love - you have nothing.

    Amazing job. Brilliantly written. Thanks for writing this poem! Keep it up! 5/5 =)