This poem is full with chaos which is great! You expressed emotions excellently and you really put your self in to this one. Your words sound really honest and emotional, well done!

THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST AMAZING POEMS IVE READ. I KNOW EXACTLY HOW THIS FEELS BECAUSE IM GOING THROUGH IT RIGHT NOW.

I really love the first stanza of this, and also the line "Time tastes sour", both of these are brilliantly done.
It isn't overly somplex, and I think it really works because of that. Fantastic stuff!

I loved that, despite how short each line was, it explained so much.

"A brilliant smile,
Big deep eyes,
All I want,
But now despise."

^^ That stanza was definitely my favourite. Excellent job.