Comments : Just Another Name

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Nice job! Some parts sounded a little forced with the rhyme, but the ending was great! Really think it had a good conclusion!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "You no longer get attached - feelings just aren't for you -
    So you continue to break hearts; it's just what you do."

    OH HOW I LOVE THOSE LINES!

    This was beautiful...heartfelt and sad, and such emotion and depth within the words, with a beautiful stunning ending to match.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    Great Poem!!
    Okay.. So I have to tell you that I added you for an author.. You are Talented and I look forward to reading more!

    5.5**
    <33

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    You know that I love this one, obviously lol. The imagery and the flow is awesome, as well as the rhymes, at some parts it felt a little forced for flow and rhyme, but there was only like two parts, so other than that, I loved this. Twas gonna place it as well, but the contest was very hard to judge and ended up jsut sticking with the other one.

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Loooove it.
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Loved it! i can definately relate!