Wow, thats long, and very good, keeps a readers attention, personal experience or made up?

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Its very real...but this poem is like 3 years old...thanx for the comment...they really mean alot....

Wow the emotion runs really deep in this 1.it always does in poems from the heart.5/5

Cory

I love how deep the emotion is in this, how its from your heart that you so desperately want to protect. amazing work, keeps readers hooked until the very last word. love it!

So good

not really the middle as a poem but its a great story about u

and the endings great

I feel very sory for that, i can feel the pain yoyu are in, it realy cathes the attention of the reader.

it is a nice poem any way keep it up.

Mack............

Wow the emotion runs really deep