This is my first poem... its up 2 you if it is nice

Im ur first vote.. :)
i voted and gave you a 5/5 of course beautiful.
:)
please return the favor

Yo peepz havent u heard the new slogan:
1st iz the worst,2nd iz the best,3rd iz the 1 wit the hairy chest! nah just kiddin lol. anyhow sorry got sorta carried away...yea that's me. back to u! i loved your poem! so sweet and b-e-a-utiful. ^^ 5/5 man! have faith! i'll add u in my prayers tonite! and also if u want check out my poems^^. i add u to fav's keep up great work!! sorry review/comment so long ><