Comments : Close your eyes

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Good job!! u have expressed so much in just four lines.. gr88

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Hmmm very very short but...
    very sweet and lovely one

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Short but powerful write....Loved it.
    Great Job!!

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Keep it quiet, dont let anyone hear ... amazing write.. u have truly captured it ..in just FOUR friggin lines.. awesome.

    Great Job

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    Too short but too expressive

    conveyed how much dreams you have and how you love him more than you think he loves you

    good luck

    Her Guardian