Great sad poem and i really feel it

I like it its really great

The form is sketchy.. But I like the word usage. And the story.
Try breaking your poem into a few more parts.
Dont stop writing. x

5/5

Omg that was great
so much emotion great finish loved it =]

And again u deliver i liked everything about that poem.u still rock:p 5/5

Cory

Looove it! absolutely amazing. 5/5