It's good.
the only thing i suggest is redoing the way you write out of your poems. like the way you shorten some words or don't spell them right.
only because then we have to try to figure out what the word's supposed to be and it takes our mind off the poem and the meaning that's in it.
other than that it's wonderful.

Ur Right........ Totally Right ! i ll Work on It ! Promise ! lol
thanks for ur Comment !

GOod one!!!

Keep up the good work.

God bless u

Thank you soo much !!