This is ahhmazing
you got reall talent but i have no idea what "condescending"means
ahah
but still love it

Thanks so much for enetering the contest. I enjoyed this piece, but for me it did not flow as nicely as some of your other work. I like the feeling behind it, it almost seems like a song. Nice work.

I loved the opening stanza to this:

"Pick up the pieces from your hideous damage --
Give me back my heart and go down with the bridge,
I`m throwing kerosene, the confetti to celebrate the ending --
Because everything you say to me is so condescending."

A great way to start off, and it got me really excited to read the rest.

It was excellent. Well done.

I was going through some of your older poetry. Just wanted to say how good I thought this was. The last two lines were very good. And as always, your rhyme so well!
*ME*