Hi
its so short, yet so meaningful, and the metaphor was awsume
i think i like this poem the most.....
keep the good work up

That was short but amazing, one year ago I woulden't of understood a poem like this but now I truly understand how it is to long for someone like this. I hope who ever your missing comes back to you. 5/5
Auna

Short yet so excellent one

Excellent Writing!!

5.5**
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:( awww so sad but cute i love it. great write yet again goran

Nicely put

Wallah I dont know what to say about this one too. I am glad that person i hope because there is no better place then being home with the ones you love the most ^_^.