Wow. i don't know what to say, it was perfectly written and well thought of. it was beautiful. a bit depressing but i still loved it. 5/5

So well expressed u r so talented

The title of this poem really caught my eye, it's great :)
The poem flows very easily and you used just the exact words to express the things you wanted to say.
I loved the last two lines in the last stanza, great usage of words.

5/5

xo angelique