Comments : Phase.

  • 16 years ago

    by ©romoж

    Excellent poems! very inspiring and good message to the reader....

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You are very right is what you say. Sometimes that light at the tunnel is the only thing that keeps us going!
    Great job, keep writing.
    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem and so true , this something we all go through in our lifes at some point and I totally agree with you on this matter , great job , ::

    hen it is time to forge ahead, and use the new knowledge just found

    We all must pass through these times of stress

    To gain our psychological and spiritual beings and be a success.

    your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    I must say this is very inspirational!! And I was actually needing a bit of encouragement.. Wonderful Poem!!

    5.5**
    <33

    And Thank You For Your Lovely Comment =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bert
    You have so much wisdom to share with the world. This piece is great.
    Thank you so much for everything.
    Love to you Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Hey Bert,

    Wonderful poem. Very insightful. Especially loved these four lines.

    "On the way through the phase, one suffers uncertainty and pain

    This is all part of growth, physical and emotional gain

    Day upon day of psychological tension

    Accompanied my multitudes of apprehension"

    That pretty much sums it up.

    Brilliant, my friend.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabrielle

    Couldnt have said it better myself

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Wonderfully penned! Stingingly true and inspirational. Every one needs to read and consider these words. [: Raw, fluid, full of wisdom.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Wow.. i really needed to read a poem like that so thank u.it was a very inspiring piece it was just great.. very meaningful xx