That was a great poem!...

the flow was great and the words you used fit and described perfectly the emotion of your poem...

keep writing and thanks for the comment!

I loved it, your poems are amazing. how do you think of these topics to write about. the way you put it together is great. 5/5

my desired inclination,
surge my self-control,
force any movements,
the will of my soul.

my fave lines ^^

So well picked words helping the meaning and aslo giving the fantastic sound to ur poem

I think that this is really good. i think that the flow was really good. everything seemed to flow together wonderfully. i think that this poem send s a powerful message...

perfect emotion!!!!

I really like this poem. it had a good flow and i just thought it was TERRIFIC!!!! it had emotion and i like that in poems! GREAT JOB! keep it up!

BabyGurl