Wow. i loved it, the way you expressed this piece was perfect. it was a great poem to read. 5/5

Great Description..Excellent Writing!

5.5*
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It was quite irregular, which i liked, because it fit with the subject matter... would have like to have known the back ground to it too. will flick through some of your other stuff. well done

Excellent. I loved everything about this one. The flow, vocab, descriptions, everything. It's such a raw topic and the two contrasts of death and the search for peace, you puzzled together very well. 5/5 Definately.

Tammie