This has such a powerful awesome message, dear Nat. I love the opening lines, just perfect. The third stanza is fantastic too. Along with those final two lines. Really this is great from beginning to end. The rhyme scheme was very effective in this write... Great, fabulous, poem! Too bad it's all true!

This packs a powerful punch Nat.... Thanks so much for sharing it with us, the words, I'm sorry to say, are so true....

First, thank you for sharing this piece...it has a very truthful message...loved the flow and word usage throughout this beautifully penned piece.

Great work!

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So powerful message and topic is excellent. You wrote it on a truly fantastic way, very creative and filed with greatly expressed emotions. Well done, you should be proud on this meaningful piece.

Super great :) 5/5