Wow.. this is soo gr8.. something new .. srsly this is really gr8.. how you have put this together.. beautiful... keep it up... once again a very beautiful wrk.. done..

Nice poem...i really like it alot....very well written..great job...~*~Cindy~*~

Thanks for the comments.
they mean alot to me.
it makes me relize i can do better im working on one right now.
but i want it alot better then this one.
because i know i can do.
because these comments inspire me.
they give me hope they give me faith
thanks.

Sometimes help is hard 2 find on your own. i hope you find it

This is very very deep but beautiful <33

Mm let me say to you this !! frist the eye run from big box of words and line so plit and structure to paragraphs and add rhyming it is a poem even you can call it free style it have it rules

i can read your feelings but try to make them organised

listen i enjoy listneing to music that male me feel same way of the song it help me feel the moment and w=find the words hope it helps