Comments : Inspiration

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow great write,felt the words
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya,
    this started off really well and then lost its flow in the middle, finally picking up again towards the end.
    We all hurt someone close to us at one time or another. If we repeatedly do this, we need to question why? Are we punishing those we love for the pain we hold inside?
    Just a thought?

    Michael