Comments : An addiction

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    So deep and such a sad write.
    its amazing how you express it ..

    "...you can break someother girls heart
    And just erase me
    But when I look at him
    Your face stains me..."

    the play of words in ur poems is nothing less than Awe-Some.

    Superb Write.

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    I liked this alot...such sad emotion but very powerful..great write!

    Brooke<3