Strange...definitely strange...it is different and the personification of sorrow contributed well to this piece. I think you mean 'against' rather than 'agents' on the third line. Word choice was effective for setting up this piece though it does have the potential to be better yet as it is, it is quite interesting.
~Faith-less

Wow...that was very different but i really liked it...keep up the good work.

Interesting....is really all I can say. Never did see the end coming...
"it leaned in and to my surprise
there i looked into my eyes.... "
Good write.

Maria