Comments : A gun and heartbreak

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    Well That Kept Me On The Edge of My Seat!! Great Poem!

    5.5**
    <33

    And Thank You So Much For Your Comment! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Wow, that was really powerful and left me in suspense until the very end....great job!

    Brooke<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Krista

    Woahhhh thats deep man.
    haha the end kinda sucks though.
    I hope you really didn't attempt that though.
    youre lucky if you did.
    :]

    great job, Kyle.

  • 16 years ago

    by AlexaBoo

    Omg i love this
    i was so into it
    i think its great!!

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    This is a really good poem

    did this happen to you??
    because trust me your not a mistake u seem like a wounderful guy!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Its not a true story, i just wrote this poem cuz i thought it was awesome. so yeah. lol thanks for the comments

  • Hey thanxs for reading mine, yours are reall good i like this one alot!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kavitha J

    Wow amazing! I love it! But its so sad tho.. I hate to think tht u r actually going thru this much hurt.. sry..

  • 16 years ago

    by Eri

    Wow this is really good
    I love it

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LS3Y

    Wow, i really liked that!!!!! good job!!!!! is that a poem about your ex? either way, it was good!!!! :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    OMG1 that was reallygood. i liked the ending. it was really really good!

    mandy xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow......i really love this poem...its very deep and very powerful..i liked the end...well awesome job..~*~Cindy~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Another emotion filled poem, really well written nothing forced or overly done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jesyka Vendetta

    Uhm wow! that was amazing! i loved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lindajane x

    Amazing very heartfelt

    :]

    xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Honey

    Niccccceeeeeeeeee

  • 16 years ago

    by melinda houston

    I like this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by BeLLa

    Oh wow !
    thats such a good write
    omg that got me on the edge of my seat then bam it was blanks
    far out
    good work
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ShadowFairy

    You're not a mistake. Believe me, noone is...

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    You should read mine

    "reply to the suicide note you didnt leave"

    5/5