Very Good Poem!!

5.5**
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Wow i have no comment on these treffic words of urs :D

Well written, i find it more of an advice to someone who feel so helpless and who sufferis from torments/agony of life... you just used a wonderful words hopefully people could read on this one to inspire them with your poem,message or advice ( good job my dear preacher)... =p

This is quite inspirational. The flow was nice and made it pleasant to read.

marcella