People write poems sometimes because they feel like it, other have a deeper reason for it. whatever ur reason may be, this is something that i've recently thought of. no one that i knew died but i've always wondered who cares when you go, or who actually meant "that was a good kid". but you'd never kno ... cuz ur dead n all. but i lik this a lot. even tho i gave u a 4 i still like it. =)

Although this was a sad poem it also sounded like there was a little bit of anger/jealousy...which is totally ok, it made it that much better...I loved how you were able to compare yourself and Josh...very nice write!

Brooke<3

Dont compare yourself to Josh. But we all wonder how we will be remembered. I know you will be remembered greatly.
5/5 always
your favorite friend
Kate~