*Squeals!*

Aw.. Rado! We love it!

A very beautiful and truthful tittle.:) You ended strongly, especially with mine and jake
s motto:).

This has to be your best peice yet, and im not just saying that cause it's dedicated to me and jake, it's truly good.

Keep it up hun:)
xxo Elaine

This is a great poem!!! I loved i. It is very very sweet....I hope i have a relationship like that.....I loved how the poem was wrote it was awsome great work....5/5

This was so sweet! Everyone wants a love that is forever and some are lucky to find it.
Two mistakes I found were in the sentences

"They fight,but there never mad for long"
"There love is unconditional."

The "there" is supposed to be "their"

Great write! *5/5*

Very very cute and adorable. Now a days we don't see many couples keeping their vows, but i wish them both good luck. The poem itself was a bit choppy for my taste, but overall 4/5 :)

This is really good I can neva rite love poems I think u did a really good job

gr8 rite 5/5

Excellent piece sounds like me and my wife, the flow was oozing loved it

5/5

Gary.

They fight,but their never mad for long.
`their = they're
The ones that have had love for ever,
`There shouldn't be a space in between for and ever .

Mmm ... it has its cuteness about it, but it's not the best I've read. I feel that you could've been more creative with it. Using "They" a lot took away from the poem for me. The beginning was just, wow, but as it hit the middle, my interest started to stray away .

Keep up the good work tho .
4/5
..__MiNDYY

The poem as a whole was good The only thing I would tweek a bit would be the start of the poem with the squarrel part it is a good opening but it seems a bit choppy pertaining to the animal then going staight to them and the fighting part seems too abrupt. Plot121

That is so true. I wish more people had this kind of love and didn't put their kids into a bad situation because of their mistake. I wish your friends the best of luck in staying together. Very nice poem. ^-^

The message was heartfelt, and very true. Sadly that it is so true that many people never find love that great. the poem was heartfelt, and nicely penned, you did a good job over all. Try steping up the vocab to add more power, and reread the poem out loud a couple of days after you first write it, to spot any place where the flow might be off, keepp the good work, and best wishes to your friends. 4/5