Comments : Run Over.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow nice with the rhyming! mood and argue!! that was awesome! good job brooke!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    WHOA is all I can really say about this...

    Im so sensative;take everything to heart
    But you put the key in the ignition and put your foot on the gas to start

    This was SO BEAUTIFUL and whoa again!

    However in the last line did you mean to put 'ones' or did you eman 'one'? I couldn't tell but I tihnk that 'one' would fit a little better! Great poem! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by cory

    Great job this 1 just screamed out at me. good job.5/5 rock on!!