This is really good! i give it a 5/5! XD

I got so many pictures when I read this line!

the sun rises on a scene of destruction

Your work is truely beautiful. I'm amazed by it. Don't ever stop writing. You put so much into your poems and that reflects on what is read.
5/5
lol ~!~ VaNiLLa PaiN ~!~

That poem was so touching i loved it!

Thats really good. :]