This is really good too! i am glad you started to put more poems on here now! lol XD

The first stanza blew me away! And and and the ocean one! And like and and and this is beautiful! That better be happy with you! This poem is very well written. 5/5 all the way.

This poem is very deep and that's what I like about it. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it, so that makes this poem excellent! It also flowed really nicely. Please keep on writing, you have talent! 5/5

~Kristina

One of my favorites.
im impressed.

Wow powerful write
i liked it alot
keep it up!

Cute 5