Comments : Not Your Remedy

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It's beautiful! Your lines are great...just when I think it's going to sound cheesy or cliche you make it just the opposite. My idea for your title would be

    "Not Your Remedy"

    because you want to be his everything, but you just can't and he needs to see it. Tell me whatcha think!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    So honored! Thanks a ton! Really fits your beautiful poem, and I'm glad I could help!
    Charisma*