This One Is VERY Good!..Very Good Writer Aswell

This poem flowed really nicely. It all fitted together perfect. Loved it. Pretty keen on you too :P lol. Glad you joined up. xoxo

This is goood
you write well

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Hey, this poem is great, good word choice, but i think u could have extended it, it was abit too short, neways read mine and let know wat u think, good job ;).

Luv Fay :)

I really like how you wrote this...the words are good they flowed really well together...very good...if you could or would like please check sum of my new ones out...agian great job...keep it up! =)

BabyGurl

I loved your choice of words and the flow...nice write!

Brooke<3

AMAZING!!

Great poem. my brother jimmy is in bagdad. its hard on all of us and i hope you get through it. great job.

mandy xx

I like it alot

I really like this one as well. :] its great. 5/5

WHOLE COW THIS IS A GREAT POEM KEEP IT UP

Wow i love it your so great of a writer

Like the emotion put into the poem, 5/5. Em x