Another wonderful poem. I know you are new but you seem like you've been writing forever. You have a natural talent for writting and I commend you for that.
This poem had a great flow to it as well. I liked your word choice and it was well put together. I can't wait to read more from you.
5/5

Take Care && Keep it up

-Shannon <3

I agree i don't have much experience but that was really good.5/5. keep on rockin!!

I agree with all of u. its so somooth i sounds like i can be turned into a song. 5/5 keep it up :)
~~jennalyn~~